Upload Lesson 1 – Documenting Life

Upload your video to the video hosting site of your choice and then enter the link in the comments with a brief descriptive title.

Feel free to take a look at what some of the other students in the class are doing. After watching their film, I would encourage you to write constructive thoughts on what you saw.
Always use a variation on the Golden Rule: “Say unto others what you’d like people to say unto you.” That is, don’t say snarky, critical, mean, ugly, unpleasant things. You wouldn’t want people saying those things to you, right?
Here are few helpful guidelines for critiquing films:

1) Avoid simply saying “I like it!” or “Great” or “Neat!” Instead, find something specific that you can praise. For instance, “I like how you framed the action to the left side and left the large building on the right to create an ominous feel.” Be specific in your praise.

2) Avoid saying “I don’t like it” or “This doesn’t work.” Instead, be specific. For instance, “I think you could have used medium shots to show the conversation instead of an extreme long shot.”

3) If you are going to say something critical, always say something honestly positive first. For instance, “I really appreciated how you accelerated the montage in that chase sequence, but perhaps you might want to consider using a wider shot instead of just closeups since all the fast camera motion made me a bit nauseous.”

Finally, a word to you, the filmmaker: you will need to have tough skin if you want to be in this business. Everyone has an opinion, and that’s just life. Ultimately, you are going to have to go with your gut. And you’re always going to have people say that what you do isn’t great. Ignore them. ?

All said, my hope is that we will create a nice little community discussion around the films that are shot, providing helpful and honest feedback for everyone.

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43 thoughts on “Upload Lesson 1 – Documenting Life

  1. https://vimeo.com/360407974
    Our backyard farm as we get ready for the winter crops coming. Mixing dirt, our chickens, orange juice, the dog and some of the plants around.

    1. My real name is brent

  2. https://vimeo.com/354739546
    Yo world, my name is actually Ethan,
    Password: compass

  3. https://vimeo.com/351688261
    A little film of a pretty butterfly on a flower.

  4. Sorry
    forgot to take out the sound

    1. Here is my video with a better font at beginning

    1. this is my video

    1. This is not my video I’m sorry I didn’t mean to send this

  5. https://vimeo.com/311977930
    this is my filming an action assignment
    the password is: action

  6. This is Landon. NOT Autumn. That is my mom… 🙂 https://vimeo.com/309512095?activityReferer=1

  7. Hello! Here is my one action film. https://vimeo.com/299902036

    1. My name is Emma – Stacey is my mom, haha.

  8. Pink Fountains by Rye Wren
    Aletheia Academy Student 3/3

  9. FLOW by Logan Aleece
    Aletheia Academy Student 2/3

  10. Fountains Downtown by Fisher Kai
    Aletheia Academy Student 1 of 3

  11. Cars on Road – by Amanda Prince
    (continuous action)

  12. This is my video of a continuous action.


    1. Just to let you know, my real name is Jesse. I’m just using my mom’s email.

  13. https://vimeo.com/292414613

    A funny video of our guinea pig– Samuel and Andrew

  14. The View of the Highway – By George Kroeker

    1. I really like the ‘overhead’ shot of the road– it gives a wonderful POV of the whole area. Plus the simplicity of the setting is really beautiful.

  15. https://vimeo.com/289945835
    Here’s my video! Thanks Evy and Caleb for staring!

  16. https://vimeo.com/289945835 Here is the link to my One Action film!

    1. Love the transition between the shots. The trees, sky, and neighborhood is aesthetically pleasing. And the action was well done– I was engaged the whole time.

      -Hannah R

    1. My name is not Nellie, it’s actually Ian. I am just using my mother’s email to get into this, (so you don’t get confused.)

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